redux

I redrew this...
I felt confident to draw her eyes.

It really helps me to draw these pics. It focuses my emotions. (As I'm sure you can tell) I'm not that eloquent, so I prefer to express myself through my drawings.

So is this one better? or the old one? (below)

Or should I not bother reworking old pic? Do they lose their truth? Do they become artificial?
I try to have my sketchbook with me at all time and draw things as they happen... to capture the moment. Reworking stuff feels weird.


(ok... i dunno If I'll keep posting songs but this one... god...)